The Glass Door
"Ahhhhhh..... borinnnngg.... it just 6:15, what can we do now"? Tyler-my uncle yawned. "Yeahhhh.... Oh, I have an idea, let's play Tom and Jerry," I said. Tom and Jerry is a game we used to play when we were young; Tom have to chase Jerry and touch Jerry then we switch. OK!
The school was in silent, it felt like we were the only living things on this Earth. We were the first people to arrive to school that time. I was Tom, the cat, so I chased Tyler. We played for about fifteen minutes and I was totally exhausted, my head was spinning and my legs started to shake like I was in the middle of the North Pole. I sat right down on the stair on the 1st floor. Tyler was right there, in front of me, irritating me with a waggle of his butt, I thought he was crazy "What, does this guy know what tired is?" I thought to myself.
I was sitting there until he was tired of doing the chicken dance and ask "What time is it now?", "I don't know, let's find out."I replied. We went up stair, and next to us was the Lab-room 101. The room was totally in white when we got there, the new campus. However, now it's dirty because of the kids were drawing and painting all over the desks. "What, it's 6:45 already!" Tyler yelled. "This is time to revenge, the chicken dance" I said(to myself). I slapped his butt and ran away.
"Ouch!". He caught me just a second before that. He grabbed me to the Lab. He hit me really hard and it was so painful that I thought I would have fell down right away, but I tried to stay still by holding the edge of the desk, and I hit him again. We had a fight in the room ( Kung Fu style) then Tyler opened the door very hard and fled. I think I won against my own uncle so I give him a chase but later I think "Why do I need to chase him, I know I have no chance to get him so I tried to close the door as fast as possible, With all the force I had, it collapsed. I fell down on my knees and hands. Everything was in red.
The security brought me to the Clinic, it wasn't painful at all. It all happened in just tick and I couldn't imagine what just happened. I'd been taking care by the nurse but when Mr.Paul and Mr.Nate stepped in, a thought came right into my mind, I was about to be expel from the school. I shivered, I was so scared that I could not speak. Afterward, I went to the hospital with the security and the office woman.
I was sitting there until he was tired of doing the chicken dance and ask "What time is it now?", "I don't know, let's find out."I replied. We went up stair, and next to us was the Lab-room 101. The room was totally in white when we got there, the new campus. However, now it's dirty because of the kids were drawing and painting all over the desks. "What, it's 6:45 already!" Tyler yelled. "This is time to revenge, the chicken dance" I said(to myself). I slapped his butt and ran away.
"Ouch!". He caught me just a second before that. He grabbed me to the Lab. He hit me really hard and it was so painful that I thought I would have fell down right away, but I tried to stay still by holding the edge of the desk, and I hit him again. We had a fight in the room ( Kung Fu style) then Tyler opened the door very hard and fled. I think I won against my own uncle so I give him a chase but later I think "Why do I need to chase him, I know I have no chance to get him so I tried to close the door as fast as possible, With all the force I had, it collapsed. I fell down on my knees and hands. Everything was in red.
The security brought me to the Clinic, it wasn't painful at all. It all happened in just tick and I couldn't imagine what just happened. I'd been taking care by the nurse but when Mr.Paul and Mr.Nate stepped in, a thought came right into my mind, I was about to be expel from the school. I shivered, I was so scared that I could not speak. Afterward, I went to the hospital with the security and the office woman.
At last, I'm glad that I've not kick out of the school but I have learn a life lesson "never fooling around with glass door".
the story was good but better check ur grammar 1st. Try to use some of the descriptive words, use less dead words. Try to tell more about your felling and action, lil' bit more detail and it'll be excellent.... :P u can also use sth call the "indirect speech", try it some other times.
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